Wednesday, June 13, 2012

quick poem verse i made up


we all break to pieces once we've been used 
no one cares if needles get in our soul
just go and put your face on 
so no-one sees the real you up inside.
permanent operations for your jobs 
so crawl away to plasic walls 

i'll extend it later, i promise!


xoxo
~lemme eat your thoughts~

1 comment:

  1. it's good so far :) WHY DOES EVERYONE HAVE TO BE SO GOOD AT POETRY AND I COMPLETELY SUCK! but then again writing has never been my strong point. but believe it or not.. some time last year i was really good at writing and got the trophy for it at coaching... but it could've been that i was good at writing or... everyone else was crap it's just that i was a tiny bit better....
    hahaha "lemme eat your thoughts" nice one :)

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